Okay, enough is enough. I’m really not happy with what I’ve done with Earth, After Liberation. The tone of the story is not what I want it to be, the story itself feels like it’s all over the place but most of all it feels like I haven’t found the soul of the story. The writing is not good enough either. I’m also not happy with writing this in first person, either. It’s beginning to feel very restrictive.
I’m going to put it away for six months before looking at it again.
I’m going to continue working on the Avoiding the Game re-write, which I’m finding a lot of fun. More on that in another post though.