Okay, my second attempt at getting this chapter done has not worked out. I’m okay with the quality of the writing but not the content. This chapter is going to be one of the most important parts of the novel, and will hopefully be very emotional. But it’s not working out how I want it to. I think I’m still a little too fond of the way I originally executed this part of the story but that won’t really work with how this re-write is working out.

I have got an idea of how I want to work this out now, but I’m still not sure how happy I’ll be with it. It’s kind of a combination of the two ways that I’ve attempted to write it so far. This will be the final attempt at writing it and whatever I write will stay wheher I like it or not until I start on the typing up of this story. I don’t want to get stuck just re-writing this one chapter because I’ll be here forever otherwise.