Tonight I have not got quite as much done as I had planned, saying that I was only two pages off that little target. It’s been a productive night though. I’m now halfway through my read of my friends work. She’s asked me to give my feedback on the stories but I wanted to cast another eye over them before I pass on that feedback. They’re good 🙂 ill post the website link when I’m not blogging from my iPad.
As for reading through Avoiding The Game I’m at page eighteen now and I got proper sucked not it. I’d forgotten much of it (including the intimate, but graphic sex scene. It’ll be deleted. It doesn’t fit) in those eighteen pages though I’ve seen there is a lot to do. Pacing alone needs work. Where I’ve got to I think I can add a lot more depth to the world and have my protagonist grow more. As I’ve read through I’ve noticed that I’ve rushed through a lot of it and need to fill in those details which will make it a more complete piece of work.
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Hi honey
I’ve nominated you for The Liebster award!
Please don’t feel obligated to accept, but if you’d like to take part all the info is here.
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Thank you! 😀 I don’t tend to get into these, simply because I’m lazy and never get round to passing it on lol. But you’ve put a smile on my face this dreary December morning 🙂 xx
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Awwww, you’re welcome honey!
I like these ones because its a bit of fun, and gives your followers a bit more info about “you” 😉
I don’t tend to talk about anything other than my writing, so it’s a chance to share other sides of me 🙂
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That’s a good idea to be honest. I think readers love seeing a little of what people are like.
My day to life is too boring to share lol
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He he he, mine too! 😉
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When I do have an Interesting day ill blog about it lol x
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